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Write about the feeling of: a really bad kiss,

Our torsos press close
Room to inhale is limited
The grease from your pores
Coats my nose...

You're unable to see the disgust I'm displaying,
Towards your pathetic attempt,
to show partnership, share fluids,
Your lips dance irrationally to tame music,
your tongue clicks/clacks; collecting saliva...

Your exhalation is overwhelming,
I'm able to recall what you've eaten,
before this intolerable act,
My lips respond to your ecstatic behavior in an apathetic manner...

The noises you make are repulsive,
Your eyes remain open for the entire duration,
I am in horror at your display of

Stand TallLittle nails reach high towards nothing,
Toes step on there tips twitching,
Torso rapidly shaking,
Water is falling ,
From the ceiling,
Skin darkens from self inflicting,
Scars are overwhelming,
Your beauty is mesmerizing.

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Model:Canon EOS REBEL T3
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AmidstTheRaveby ~FurbinatorZ

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An edit of this one:

What ones better,does it need improvement?
What do you think is wrong?
Over edited?
You be the judge.

love 2 2

joy 1 1

wow 1 1

~~mad 0 0~~

~~sad 0 0~~

~~fear 0 0~~

~~neutral 0 0~~

*jaimejouelapiano Nov 30, 2012 Hobbyist Photographer

really cool.

~FurbinatorZ Nov 30, 2012 Hobbyist Photographer

Thanks!

*crh Nov 29, 2012 Hobbyist General Artist

wow! great one! definitely not over edited, on the contraty, the stark contrast is turning it into such a graphical masterpiece!

~FurbinatorZ Nov 30, 2012 Hobbyist Photographer

Thank you so much

~Kharinn Nov 28, 2012 Hobbyist General Artist

This one is definitely the most interesting one. I think that the coloured version doesn't have this "ageless" look. B&W brings out the essence of the picture.

~FurbinatorZ Nov 28, 2012 Hobbyist Photographer

Thanks for your opinion it gives me a better love for editing.

Did you look at another edit of this picture? Does it have that ageless effect with the color? [link]

~Kharinn Nov 30, 2012 Hobbyist General Artist

You're welcome, I'm glad it helped

I hadn't seen the other edit, but I looked at it now. I'm not sure I could describe it by using the word "ageless" because this edit gives it a whole other meaning. By being the only colourful thing in the picture, the belt gives the impression of coloured glasses - the person in the photo lives in a B&W world but chooses to see it differently, the way he wants to.
Good job! You changed the meaning of the whole picture with a very simple edit

~FurbinatorZ Nov 30, 2012 Hobbyist Photographer

Thank you very much for taking the time to let me know your personal opinion

I was always nervous when I first started editing pictures.

~Kharinn Dec 5, 2012 Hobbyist General Artist

My pleasure! I think you have a gift for that

~COphotog Aug 24, 2012 Hobbyist Photographer

Very cool. I think the B&W is much more dramatic looking over the color verson.

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